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After the Battle of the Bassen Rift, the Enterprise was heavily modified to meet the specifications of Starfleet's next generation warship. The fact that the Federation's flagship was now an armed-to-the-boots dreadnought signalled the onset of a new era for the Federation. After the Klingons, the Romulans, the Cardassians, the Dominion and finally the Borg, Starfleet drew a line they've sworn they won't allow anyone to cross anymore.
Meanwhile, at Narendra III, Captain Jean-Luc Picard struggles with his gut emotions not to feel joy as he orders his tactical officer to fire the Mark XX Fixed-Arc Phaser Spinal Lance. Against the most dreadful starship, and here, at this historical place, the good Captain makes a small nod to himself, thinking some old and some not so old wrongs are now finally corrected...





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Kerchan3 Featured By Owner Jul 31, 2015  Hobbyist Digital Artist
    Very nice drawing! I have only one slight problem but, it has nothing to do with this nice drawing!  Star Trek "cannon" has no such weapon that is mentioned here. There was no Mark XX Fixed-Arc Phaser Spinal Lance! However, there is an extremely powerful weapon that is truly a "Startrek: Cannon" weapon that will do this type of damage without working up even a sweat! I would recommend the Mk II Isokinetic Cannon!!
    There are three versions of this Isokinetic Cannon; The Mk I Isokinetic Cannon output is 35,000 T.W.'s / The Mk II Isokinetic Cannon output is 43,750 T.W.'s / The Mk III Isokinetic Cannon output is 38,500 T.W.'s. Each of these different versions have different ranges as well.  I would be glad to look them up if anyone was interested in their various ranges! There are several upgraded versions of the Sovereign Class Starship as well as several other newer model Starships and they all carry Isokinetic Cannons!! Several of the newer weapon's designs include 2 to 4 Isokinetic Cannons set in tandem where they can do maximum damage!!  Great thanks goes out to the crew of the Voyager for bringing this Isokinetic Cannon back from the Delta Quadrant!! 
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thefirstfleet Featured By Owner Aug 1, 2015
I took the name from Star trek Online. The weapon/ship itself appeared in the TNG finale, All Good Things


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JESzasz Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015  New Deviant Student Traditional Artist
 Thalaron Generator?! Pssh!!! You and your fancy new weapon!

 Too bad it only works on unshielded targets, you lying bastard!!!

The Mk-XX Phaser Spiral Lance unfortunately for you has no such limitations!
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thefirstfleet Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2015
:D
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ninjanoto Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2015
ALL HAIL THE GALAXY X DREADNOUGHT AND HER SPINAL LANCE BEAM
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thefirstfleet Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2015
F' yeah!
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"Whom do you suppose possesses the bigger guns now, Shinzon? We may be explorers, but we can pack a punch when we damn well need to." 
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:iconthefirstfleet:
thefirstfleet Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2015
:D
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:iconflameheartredemption:
Shinzon: *rage face* Nooo, you--urk! *dies of degradation*
As the Scimitar explodes gloriously Jean-Luc sips a cup of Earl Grey and mutters: "Tal Shiar-bred nitwits.facepalm Will they ever learn? NEVER mess with an Enterprise, especially not a refit."
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Crimson-Dragon-King Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice Job! :)
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thefirstfleet Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014
Thank you :D
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Crimson-Dragon-King Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your Welcome! :icondragongrin:
I have the  Fleet Galaxy-X in Star Trek Online, what's your in game name?
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CharTeam Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
sad part is that is how it would have went down. that gun is just own sauce. in star trek online they had to make it to where you have to be stationary to fire it as to not make it too over powerd. the galaxy refit is just own sauce. love this picture. 
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thefirstfleet Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014
Thank you very much!
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CharTeam Featured By Owner Aug 28, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
your very welcome. id love to see a render of that ship and the voyager next to each other. those being two of my favorite
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s1cohen Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
Another fantastic job! The first time I saw "All Good Things..." my jaw dropped when the Enterprise's phasers punched through those Klingon ships.
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thefirstfleet Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2014
I can imagine that :D

TNG lacked the punch all other series had. All other ships, especially the Defiant, were shown to have massive firepower. Only the Enterprise-D looked a bit more tame. I know that TNG was based on peaceful diplomacy, but still...
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s1cohen Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014
Imagine if this Enterprise had the armor and transphasic torpedoes that the Voyager crew developed in "Endgame". :)
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Greyman01 Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Imagine if they made a dreadnaught out of the sovereign class.


im not sure if I would like the outcome.
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leoas1701 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2015  Student Artist
It would be absurdly powerful, i mean if the enterprise e could destroy a borg cube imagine what if it was a dreadnought
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thefirstfleet Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
Me neither. The Sovereign itself was over the top.
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Greyman01 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I imagine it already being a dreadnaught itself, considering its a patrol ship.
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JESzasz Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2015  New Deviant Student Traditional Artist
 Someone already made a dreadnaught based on the Sovereign class for Bridge Commander. She is called the Intimidator class.
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Greyman01 Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Oh, someone already had a comment like this....

nevermind...
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Frostlancer001 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014
I like your timeline much more than the "official" one.

Handshake 
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thefirstfleet Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2014
Thank you! I'm always trying my best!
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Rendevez15 Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
Alright Who drank Picards tea? ......in a more serious note what would happen if this fought enterprise e....my votes the dreadnought
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thefirstfleet Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2014
The Dreadnought is much stronger than the Sovereign class. Not so fast and manouverable, but has a much larger firepower.
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Insane-Randomness Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Only in your head.  I make mincemeat out of the Galaxy-X in my Scimitar.
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thefirstfleet Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013
It's on! :D
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Insane-Randomness Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I have one word for you why it isn't: Thalaron...
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thefirstfleet Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013
Might I give you a phrase: Mk. XX Fixed-Arc Phaser Lance, a.k.a. the big friggin gun on the Galaxy Dreadnought :D
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Insane-Randomness Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Psh, so you have a big gun that "Might" break through a ships shields (It's never broken through mine).  I have a weapon that can kill an entire planet with just a teaspoon of it's ammo...
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Greyman01 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
STO?
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Insane-Randomness Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Very much so, though I've moved on from the scimi by now and am using a power drain Dauntless.

I kill things to death with that ship. With science!
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Greyman01 Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2015  Hobbyist Artist
Eh, I just use antiproton crtdx3 now most of the time with my fed. Doing 8k with that thing and it's still growing.

BTW, you start you DR character yet?
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Armory18 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2013
You should do a scene where the D is taking two ships out with one shot.
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thefirstfleet Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
Hmmm... :D
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Armory18 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013
You have to admit that that thing is powerful enough and if I hits the Antimatter storage....

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Shadowkey392 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013
Nice job!
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thefirstfleet Featured By Owner Oct 5, 2013
Thank you very much!
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Kittamaru Featured By Owner Sep 18, 2013
Imagine if they did this to the Sovereign class... with the new Warp Core designs that were inspired by the Defiant project... a quartet of Warp Nacelles powered by dual Type 11 Warp Cores... but you would have to put a pair of these to either side of the Quantum Torpedo Turret... good grief that'd look incredibly badass :D
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Shadowkey392 Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013
I'd say go with all of them, but put the pairs of nacelles on the ship so they extend straight out to the side, Voyager-style.  The usual x-shape doesn't really look all that good.
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thefirstfleet Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013
Nahh, I don't like the Sovereign class.
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Kittamaru Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013
Really? Eh, to each his own I guess. I like how sleek it is... don't get me wrong, the Ent-D was iconic... but it looked like an explorer. A scientific, diplomatic, and general all-around all-purpose ship, designed to be a jack of all trades.

To me, the Sovereign class just screams "I'ma kill you" when it hauls ass into battle :)
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thefirstfleet Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013
The Sovereign deviated too much from the original designs. If it had a neck, than maybe...
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deadeye2021 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014
E-E was designed to fight the Borg--specifically. It also was large enough to meet the demands of long range explorability. The sleekness in design and configuration was the Federation's solution to the problem of warp 5+ damaging subspace. The new design allowed for a better configuration of the starship's warp field and nullified the speed limit. Now, she's the fastest ship in the fleet :D

Despite this, the TWOK 1701 is my all time favorite ship.
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Kittamaru Featured By Owner Sep 19, 2013
Ah, I see where you're coming from... yeah, compared to the TOS designs especially, it was drastically different. I'm guessing you probably aren't a fan of the Sabre, Norway, Steamrunner, Akira, or Prometheus designs?
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thefirstfleet Featured By Owner Sep 20, 2013
Sabre? No, too clunky.
Norvay: Massive fan, even built the model myself. Why? It's called USS Budapest in the movie!!! :D
Steamrunner? Now which one was that?
Akira? A bit off-scale, the saucer is a bit small for the overall bulk for my taste, but a good design nevertheless.
Prometheus? Looks too much like a Star Wars ship.
The only modern designs I accept are the Defiant and the Voyager. Why? Because the Defiant is a never-before-attempted prototype for a mini-dreadnought and the Voyager is modelled around experimental Warp fields, the "green Warp drive" concept with the folding nacelles.
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Kittamaru Featured By Owner Oct 4, 2013
Hm, actually, what do you think of the Oberth class? The medical ship Beverly had in All Good Things. I also rather enjoyed the Nebula class :D
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